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Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:43 am | |
| (well ha then you cant hurt me very much at all)
Harp winced at the pressure that was on her back. Using all her strength she stood up and started "bucking" like a bucking bronco. (Thank Adrenaline rushes!) | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:24 am | |
| (yeah.....i guess) Hotaru clinges her claws into your shoulders and sinks her teeth into the back of your neck. Pulling up her back legs she kicks at place its broken. | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 7:05 am | |
| (you dont know where it's broken, though.)
Harp flopped onto her back, pinning Hotaru down with her body. Then she twisted, being in the same position as she last had caught Hotaru in. She bared her teeth at Hotaru's neck. | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:23 am | |
| hotaru pulls forward until her head is level with your body. she bites your stomach, and twists. | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:51 pm | |
| The skin on Harp's underbelly was torn and bleeding, but her guts weren't spilling out (XD). She was fine, besides the pain. It didn't compare to what had happened before. The pain was fierce, even though it didn't do much. It did nothing, in fact. Nothing except make Harp even more determined to defeat Hotaru.
Harp ducked her head until she was looking into Hotaru's eyes. She twisted her jaw until she could bite Hotaru's, causing her to let go. Growling deeply, Harp leaned forward and nipped Hotaru's neck . . . hard. She didn't let go. She wasn't killing Hotaru, but she could now that she was in the right position.
(That's the best writing I've done in a few weeks. Took a lot of work. Sometimes dramam is essential, especially in battles. Man, I hate drama.) | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
Posts : 134 Join date : 2010-07-22 Location : Some where in the universe. Maybe.
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 3:55 pm | |
| (im an awsome writeer! WON THREE AWARDS, AND 100 DOLLARS FROM MY WRITING!) (omg, my injures compared to yours you: broken back, ripped up stomach, messed up muzzle, long scrath down back, ripped ear mine: nipped paw, missing teeth , little bite on neck) hotaru pulls her two paws free, she was stronger at the moment , had less severe injuries. she rips your stomach up more. | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:23 pm | |
| Harp bites Hotaru's neck again . . . harder. She ignores her stomach pains. It's not much different from a stomach ache. Basically a stomach ache on the outside!
(I am the best writer I know, and those I know agree with me.) | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:26 pm | |
| Hotaru winces once more, then pulls up a paw slashing you face. Useing her other paw hotaru worked her way through your stomach to your entrails (dogs can survive entrials comeing out of there bodys) she keeps ripping, avoiding to rip your intestense but widens the area of the wound | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:27 pm | |
| Harp bites your paw and twists, breaking it. She nips your neck harder again. | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:31 pm | |
| hotaru whimpers because of her paw she. shes better than i thought! useing her unhurt paw, she grabs an intestine strand, threataning to break | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:43 pm | |
| Harp snaps that paw and bites Hotaru's neck again. | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:49 pm | |
| hotaru pulls down a bit (im seriously giong in the pool now!) | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:51 pm | |
| (well, my stomach is turned inside out and my back is broken. What's the likeliness I'm going to win? Adrenaline can only take you so far.)
Harp stood firm. She didn't dare relax her position. Hotaru was beginning to give up! This might be her only chance! | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:52 pm | |
| she tenderly pokes a paw at your entrails | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:55 pm | |
| (That's it?)
Harp winced and put her weight on Hotaru's stomach, then began clawing at it. "See how you like it!" | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:57 pm | |
| (yeah, dont want to kill you XD)hotaru whimbers and goes limp in you grasp | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:01 pm | |
| Harp doesn't fall for it. | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:02 pm | |
| hotaru sighs the musters all her strength together to pull free, franticly she jumps away. | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:04 am | |
| The rain stills to a drizzle, and dawn peeks out from behind the gray clouds. Harp knows she has won. She sighs wearily. | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:23 am | |
| (i wasnt giveing up! i realy wasnt, was going to try a new techniche...) Hotaru smiles "i wasnt giveing up! i know when i can fight no more!but that is not now!" hotaru leaps in and bites your side, then darts away again, she reapeats this. | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:13 am | |
| "I've still won" When Hotaru runs to bite Harp again, Harp tackles her and pins her to the ground. | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:36 am | |
| hotaru rolls her eyes "fine, lets see if you can survive those injures!" she spits. (sorry, dont realy mean that) "we dont even have shaman!" | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:52 am | |
| "You don't even have a chance!"
Harp bites down on Hotaru's neck very hard, but is careful not to kill her, just hurt enough to be very scared. | |
| | | Liberty+Courage
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:23 am | |
| hoyaru coughs up some blood "stop...please...i g-give" | |
| | | Harpevermore
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Leader Competition Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:41 am | |
| Harp lifts her head but doesn't let Hotaru up. | |
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